I loved the guitar. I hated your singing. The lyrics were decent.
Also, you should have sung the song with more passion. Your parodying a fun upbeat song, your singing it like your dead. Haha, get it :P
Also, you don't have to submit the first version you do. You messed up the lyrics and kinda paused a couple times.
Thanks, I appreciate your creative criticism.
I loved it
As of right now this is my second favorite song on Newgrounds (Future President by FireTruckRob is my favorite) not made by me or my cousins. I agree with the first post, I don't know if you even really needed 2 singers through the verses, and you can't really harmonize. The chorus is great though.
As I said before, it sounded to bland and plain with one singer. I'm glad you really like it ^_^
I'm not trying to make any enemies or anything, but I gotta be honest, I agree with the first 2 reviews. The first time I couldn't tell what you were saying. Just now I could finally understand the chourus because you posted the lyrics. If you'd turn up the volume on the vocals at a couple points I'd give your song a 9. I can't give it a 10 beacause I don't know what "Aberrant" means, and I can't give a 10 to any song based on a word I've never heard of.
One more thing, I don't know if it's you or not, and sorry if it's not. Though someones been voting down a lot of good songs recently. Though I noticed your song got rated up by like .30 while all these other good songs were getting voted down. Noones going to go to general rock if the best songs in the section are getting 0's so someone else can move their song up an extra place. Again sorry if it's not you, just seems kind of suspicious.
BTW, just fyi, I voted either 2 or 3 for you a couple days ago for ratings, can't remember which. I listen to every song before I vote, I only give 4s or 5s to great stuff I'd listen to again (or pretty good stuff that has a unfairly low rating), 0s and 1s for stuff made on a comp or no effort, others I vote are 2s or 3s.
Well thank you for the lengthy review! Apparently I have a huge problem with enunciation (probably due to the slight lisp I have) and I know that I need to write less vague lyrics. About the definition of the word abberant - I expected that few would know what it means, it was suggested to me by my drummer, and as a precaution I included the definition as the description of the song. As for the voting, I have to say that I am guilty of spamming just about everyone I know with the link to the audio page, and I can't accept responsibility for what anyone else does, but I will tell people in the future not to unfairly skew the voting here... I'm not looking to make any enemies either, just trying to get comments/suggestions on my hard work. Thanks!
Pretty good song
I would have gave it a 10, but a few things bugged me.
I've never played EverQuest so I don't know wtf your talking about in the song
You start talking in that really annoying voice at a couple points
You end it by killing yourself. I would have liked it better if you had overcame your addiction, or got together with the gnome , and picked up the guitar tempo to go with the better ending.
Still a good song, I voted a 4 out of 5 for it's rating.
Phil has a very annoying speaking voice, but he's a decent lead singer. Certainly better than me or Vladimir. Katherine's good also.
But yeah, you have to play an MMORPG to really understand it. At least that's what Phil tells us. *We* have lives.
Clarity, Clarity, Clarity
I couldn't make out the lyrics. That was my number one problem with the song. The music, guitars, it all sounds pretty generic, nothing special. Turn up the volume on the singing, turn down the volume on the guitar.
the point of it was to have it down...it makes you listen more carefully.
My favorite Newgrounds song
I found this at 2.5 and gave it a 5, it's a shame it had such a low rating an so few people heard this for so long. It's also a shame Bush is getting 4 more years :-/ Tho this is still probably my favorite song on Newgrounds (and not just cause I hate Bush, seriously.) I've listened to this song like 100 times, and have been singing it when walking around town. Ppl are like "WTF are you singing?". I got no real criticism for this song, except for the choking, stroking, choking, rhyme.I hope you submit more songs like this, upbeat and funny. Songs that are too serious always bug me.
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